Patagonia changes

Usually when I make changes I'll edit the original post, keep the blog clean, avoid repetition and all that fun stuff. However, I thought these changes do a good job of showing how a fresh set of eyes, or letting an idea incubate for a day or two can help. It shows a lot of things, including my thought/editing process.
I'm fully aware of Patagonia's lack of advertising. I'd like to think this without the strapline and logo could be considered for their amazing catalog. My goal is to start producing more work in that direction thanks to this project and the outstanding work IKEA has been putting out.